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Rainy Dawn by MacRebisz Rainy Dawn by MacRebisz
Hmmm, not completely satisfied with this one.

Any critique more than welcome.


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Excellent ship design with a fantastic use of basic shapes to make produce heavy details and enforce the profile of the ship as well as the city around it. Another defining is the use of colour to make the ship stand out from the city around it. A second feature is the great and consistent use of technique used throughout this piece. A final feature which really stands out is the bright glow of the thruster plooms which is a highly eye catching factor but as well as the thrusters there is also the looming glow from the engines underneath the ship which seems as if it illuminates the city below.
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SpartanB214 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's as if you opened a mirror portal to another world. :+favlove:
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quodlibetarian Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
Utterly Impressive. Two things I love most; rain and cityscape are making fusion here! It feels like looking the bright area of city from blacked out place!
Can't wait to see more of your project!
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ebag5 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Professional Filmographer
I really like it- you really get a sense of the atmosphere the rain makes

Only problem I have is the big building with the ship behind it- somehow it looks a bit flat, maybe it's the light?
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ditto9 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Oh my god, that's just stunning. I'm so jealous of your skills! :D
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :) it's just a matter of practice :D
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Timeship Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Professional Writer
Very good, finally something classy!
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karo-cat Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2009
przepiękne <3
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Dzieki :)
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:iconravensscar:
RavensScar Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful sense of atmosphere. :D
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you! :D
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:iconravensscar:
RavensScar Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :D
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JEHUTY-V2 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009
i like it =3

& the "making of" is helpful, thanks for submitting it.
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :)
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:iconnartemide:
Nartemide Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009  Student Digital Artist
YOU ARE GREAT!
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Me? XD Thanks :D
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:iconnartemide:
Nartemide Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009  Student Digital Artist
yeah, you!
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :XD:
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:iconstev3-design:
Stev3-Design Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009
amazing >_<
uncurse me ;)
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
hmmm I wish I knew how xD
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:iconnachtfalter89:
Nachtfalter89 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
Very nice, but my fav ship concept was thisone --> [link]
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah, I loved searchlight ship too, but it wasn't best one for the topic "Dawn" which was theme for this piece and I couldn't change it ;) I still love this concept and I will use it in future pieces :)

Thanks!
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MapleShilc Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
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first sight with the thumbnail seemed like a photo, which is good, nice mood and tone for the colouring, but when viewing full size, two thing came up, one of the biggest one is resolution, not nearly clear enough, even when there is rain. the rain itself, look like droppings ._. ... the closer ones, ever thought of using just clear reflective water?... which bends light, not blur them, or turn them to milky kinda thing. and Different persepctive yeah... kinda look like a fisheye view, but not really at the same time. How the large building on the right, and the building on the left has a very weird look, well it seems like a fish eye, but there isnt a fish eye curve to it. last thing is, it has no focus at all, when you are looking at it, first sight is great, but after a while, your eye doesnt know where it should be looking at... theres two huge contrast areas, one is the light on the building, the other one is the one far away... my eyes are just kept on switching between.
however, great detail, great mood, nicely done as usual, the above are just my personal opnion >_< please dont stab me ...
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MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
hey, I won't stab you don't worry xD Thank you for your honest critique :) I don't like this piece from the very beginning, I still need to work on some parts. Thanks again :)

:stab:

:XD:
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MapleShilc Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
-dies from the stabbing-
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:iconspectreln:
SpectreLN Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Chol...cia... :O Stylowe, nie ma co :)
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
dzieki :)
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QAuZ Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
well done
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MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks! :D
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SSRMNM Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
Nice(feel the detail in my comment?)
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:XD: thanks! :D
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Scorpidilion Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
good job ;)
i also like the version with the ship with the searchlights
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MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
and thanks :XD:
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
hmmm yeah, searchlight ship will be back soon, I promise! :D
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Scorpidilion Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
woohooo :D
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Matkraken Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very nice bro ;D
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks mate :)
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Matkraken Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you re welcome ^^
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PhobosKE Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful work :) I love it man :)
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MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :)
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ifreex Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G mate :+favlove: :D
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks mate :) glad you like it :ahoy:
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EmilLarsson Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The shadow on the big building looks a bit wierd :/
Other than that, I like this new colourtheme more :D
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
great you like it :) there are many flaws in this image, actually I hate it, so I need to quickly do another one :XD:
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EmilLarsson Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, you do ;)
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radu-jm Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional General Artist
I thinks it works really well!
The gradual transition from dark to light is really powerful!
Good job!
:judge:
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :)
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priteeboy Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man I wish I knew how to paint cities, I just can't draw them for the life of me, I have to make them in 3D which I suppose allows more experimentation with lighting and angle - but modelling all those buildings is just ridiculously long and impractical at times :faint:

That big craft on its own looks interesting, but yeah, not sure if it fits where it is, kinda looking like its smashing through that building at the moment :O
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MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
hmmm, all you are saying is true. :) thanks :D
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TheChevver Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009   Photographer
it seems to me that there is conflicting perspective, I can't seem to define the vanishing point. The atmosphere and sense of scale work very well though ;).
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:iconmacrebisz:
MacRebisz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
yeah, vanishing points are rather 'undefined' here, which is bad thing. very bad actually.

thanks :)
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